IT......
Was good for a first flash.
It needs some improvement tho, on the animation and the drawings.
Some of the drawing looked like you just got tired and rushed it.
But besides that it was good.
IT......
Was good for a first flash.
It needs some improvement tho, on the animation and the drawings.
Some of the drawing looked like you just got tired and rushed it.
But besides that it was good.
Yeah, it got kinda close to the deadline and I was indeed tired.
Yeah..
What were you thinking when you made this.
None of this is good.
Remove it.
i don't even know how ot got over 1.00
I was thinking Mario and dick at the SAME TIME
Yes it is, it's THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST THE BEST
No.
I do... I do.
Pretty random..
The animation was good tho.
Didn't care for the song.
idk
it's okay, because other people liked it.
uhhh..
This was by far the most horrible flash i have ever seen.
Thanks, I try.
ummm....
Im going to have to say that i liked it.
I like those kinda weird animations.
I think you got something going here.
This is the kinda stuff i make, so fix the drawings and animation.
Put some more time and effort into it and i think it will come out good in the end just let me know if you submit a longer better version of this
Glad you liked it and ill keep ya posted :}
Although...
It was your third animation you could have tried harder.
Not saying you didn't but maybe next time make like a story or something.
Instead of heads spinning and music playing.
Thanks for comment Nathan
And by the way when I said third animation I've done.
I meant third thing ever tried putting into flash 8 not third thing ever published.
It was..
Whatever.
The drawings and animations were good.
But nothing too exciting or anything.
Way too short, and the music kept playing at the end
So, you decided that animation and artwork don't matter, what matters is how long the music plays? It's supposed to, if the music just stopped it would have felt clumsy.
It was....
Okay.
it lacked comedy.
Didn't really find it funny.
But the animation was and drawings were good
So im going to score you on that.
Well, it isn't really funny to those who've never read the book...but it's good to know that people think my graphic skills are getting better.
Thanks for the honesty.
~Pelo
Yes the presentation....
was okay.
But the animation and drawings at the end made me think you were 10.
I dont know if you are or not but if you are than that explains alot hhahaha
No I'm 19.
uhh
You cant understand what they are saying
and the guy in the background was doing the same thing
You need to fix this or make something new probably with your own drawings
i watched 10 seconds of it and i was already irritated
Yeah none of your business. See all the other flashes made by other people. See how my stuff stands out against the KK?S. Seriously, you perfectionists always want your own drawings. I say screw it...
Update:
after seeing your flash, i was scared. The guy looked like he was from siberia and the voice acting; abysmal. and you say this is bad.
I just got back into animation. So if any of you guys have tips, then i would appreciate it. Thanks.
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